I would only add a comma after the word "anytime". Deleting "and fearlessly" also makes sense to me.
I like it.
Greg
"Jim Rye" Jim.Rye@mail.wvu.edu 01/09/07 10:26 AM >>>
I think "and fearlessly" can be cut because it is implicitly redundant with "safely". Otherwise, I like it as is.
Frank Gmeindl fgmeindl@verizon.net 1/8/2007 8:21 PM >>>
Bike Board Members,
Please give me your feedback on the following suggested Bicycle Board vision statement:
All Morgantown residents can enjoy bicycling safely and fearlessly anywhere, anytime for any reason. Morgantown residents choose to ride bicycles for transportation as well as recreation. Our state and our nation recognize Morgantown for the benefits of bicycling to our health, our environment, our economy and our quality of life.
Frank
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