Nick,
 
I enjoyed the video.  You did a nice job as well as the little news caster.  I only noticed one obvious place where the video didn't match your commentary.  Around time 6:08 you were talking about starting and stopping.  The little boy didn't demonstrate the stop as you were explaining the process of stopping.  I think you can find a few places where the boy stops and hopefully put those in at that point.  Good Job!  I hope you can get it done in time.
 
Marilyn
 
> Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2011 22:45:28 -0400
> From: director@positivespin.org
> To: bikeboard@cheat.org
> Subject: [Bikeboard] "Let's Start Biking" youth cycling skills video
>
> Good evening,
> I received the video in rough draft form from Robby at about 6pm today. We viewed it on his computer and since that time I've been figuring out how to upload it to YouTube. It now available at this link.
> http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2Ic1XlJKZVM
>
> I apologize for this additional delay, due entirely to my unfamiliarity with the process.
> I'd like to make the following disclaimers about the video in its current form:
> - The whole thing is in rough draft form. This is as much as Bobby could get done in the time available. He's spending the rest of his time before leaving getting ready for his trip. He thinks he has about 6hrs work left to get it in final polished form. That will include finishing the Title Page, Intro, musical soundtrack, graphics and concluding scene/credits.
>
> - He expects to have time over this weekend after he gets to Orlando to complete the work. He'll send us a DVD Tuesday, and final copies with cases and graphics following our final approval. He has already exceeded the number of hours he forecast on the contract, but is willing to put in the additional time necessary to make it look polished.
> - I've reviewed it myself and am making some comments, which I will post tomorrow morning. I welcome your additional comments.
> Thanks again for your patience, and guidance.
> Nick
>
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