I've written a few press releases at work and these changes don't surprise me. The original release was too long and personal.

I think the DP's version is fine and nice.

aira

On Wed, Sep 1, 2010 at 8:30 AM, Frank Gmeindl <frank.gmeindl@comcast.net> wrote:
Bicycle Board Members,

An article entitled, "Morgantown ads sidewalk bike parking" appeared in today's Dominion Post that is so different from the press release that I sent them that I'm compelled to send you that which I sent them.  Please see attached.


Frank Gmeindl
Cyclists fare best when they act and are treated as drivers of vehicles




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